I really enjoyed this demo and am definitely looking forward to playing more levels!!! The art direction was also really fun :D I especially like how the item and character design looked like book illustrations! Jimmy was also a very interesting character and I love how his dialogue would switch between extreme friendliness, corporate platitudes, and ominous disregard for mundane details! My main feedback would probably be mouse sensitivity options and maybe the option to speed up dialogue, on occasion the dialogue took a long time to read through so I think it may be helpful to add! Overall this was very fun, good luck with future development and I hope you have a nice day!!!
Haha there is something eerie about this game.. I kept feeling like something scary was gonna happen. Also, Jimmy has a nice face lol.
I feel like the beginning is a lot more 'tell' rather than 'show'. Maybe there is some other way you can show the player how to play the game without all the dialogue! Really nice though :)
Thank you for the feedback! I didn't expect anyone aside from my friends to play this, since this is just a demo version of the unfinished game. So I will add more levels and change some things :)
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That was fun, the text and stuff takes a while and I would like to be able to just read it fast then move on but I hope you guys make the full game :)
the loading screen takes a bit long though
I really enjoyed this demo and am definitely looking forward to playing more levels!!! The art direction was also really fun :D I especially like how the item and character design looked like book illustrations! Jimmy was also a very interesting character and I love how his dialogue would switch between extreme friendliness, corporate platitudes, and ominous disregard for mundane details! My main feedback would probably be mouse sensitivity options and maybe the option to speed up dialogue, on occasion the dialogue took a long time to read through so I think it may be helpful to add!
Overall this was very fun, good luck with future development and I hope you have a nice day!!!
Thanks! I will definitely consider your suggestions :)
when will the full game be released?
when I'm done ;) I don't wanna stress myself making it.
Haha there is something eerie about this game.. I kept feeling like something scary was gonna happen. Also, Jimmy has a nice face lol.
I feel like the beginning is a lot more 'tell' rather than 'show'. Maybe there is some other way you can show the player how to play the game without all the dialogue! Really nice though :)
Thank you for the feedback! I didn't expect anyone aside from my friends to play this, since this is just a demo version of the unfinished game. So I will add more levels and change some things :)